Hey ok so first i wanted to say good job on your recital.... As for the corrections: you need to make sure that all your positions are correct and that your knees are straight at ALL times. For exampl in ron de jambe you need to make usre you leg is actually side otherwise it starts to look like an awkward en dehor. Another thing I noticed was you fifth was tight so make sre it is! To help that you can do inner thigh exercises. Overall just make sure that your back is straight and your legs are from never-end1ng-story
(your other part)…. not bent. Just keep practicing and remember that practice makes perfect!
thanks!!! i’ll work on those.