Well, you asked for constructive criticism, so here goes! (I commend you for that, by the way.) First of all, your strengths are definitely your extensions, fluidity, and maturity you show in your dancing. I think things to work on would be making sure your supporting leg isn't buckling underneath you during grands battements and extensions. Also, when you're on demi pointe it would be better to be higher on your metatarsals (bend your toes more) and more over your toes in pointe shoes. :) from but-as-for-me-and-my-life
thank you!!! i definitely need to work on my knees.